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Mulan Turtlefied Chapter 6

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                                                           We're movin' out

   "Look girl I am all for taking a bath, but what if someone sees you?" Mona asked Venus nervously. It was night time and the soldiers had finished their training so Venus had come to the little bath at the spring near the camp.

   "Just be cause I look like a man doesn't mean I have to smell like one." Venus snapped at her wrapping her hair tie up.

   "Look, I'm with you all the way, I don't really like than corn-ship smell, but some people do." Mona told her. Venus jumped into the water and sighed happily starting to wash herself off. "Alright now get out! You know, before you get all pruney and stuff." Mona told her holding up a towel.

   "Mona," Venus said smiling at her "If you're so worried why don't you go stand watch?"

   Mona rolled her eyes and walked away from the water a bit, throwing the towel over her shoulder. Walking up to Crickee she sighed and said "Yeah, yeah. Stand watch Mona," she said mimicking Venus "while I blow our secret with our stupid girly habits." Mona looked at Crickee rolling her eyes again "Not that I am opposed to taking a bath, I don't want to smell like a man either, but I mean come on!"

   Mona was so caught up in her rant that she didn't notice the three males running her way. "Mona! Mona!!" Crickee cried pulling her scarf. Mona looked up just in time to see the three males race past her. One of them threw their underwear onto her.

   She screamed and jumped out of it. Looking over to the men pulling their clothes off and jumping into the water she started to panic. "Man!" Mona cried "We are doomed! There are a couple of things Venus and I share that I know they're bound to notice!" Mona raced off into the water to try and help her friend.

   Back in the water Venus spun around and ducked into the water as the three males jumped into the water. The orange dressed turtle placed one of his three toes into the water to test it before crying "CANNONBALL!!!" and jumping into the water making a wave wash over them all.

   In an effort to try and hide from them, Venus grabbed a lily pad and placed it over her face. It didn't however work for Raph had seen her "Hey, Pei!" he called to her.

   Freezing in her actions and cursing that Mona had been right she placed the lily pad back onto the water smiling "Oh. Hi guys!" she said "I didn't know you were hear!" all three male looked at each other. They had been particularly loud when entering the water. "I was just washing so I'm clean and I'm going to go. Bye, bye!!" She said quickly before hiding behind a rock.

   Not taking the hint Mikey swam up to her "Come back here! I know we were jerks to you before, so let's start over." he said smiling apologetically. "Hi, I'm Michelangelo, but you can call me Mikey." Mikey said holding out his hand. Venus grabbed it, but held her arm low so nothing else would show.

   "And I'm Donny." Donny said coming up behind her.

   She got lower in the water saying shyly "Hello Donny."

   "And I am Raph!" Raphael said standing on top of the Rock. She looking away quickly seeing that he was completely naked. "King of the rock!" He said making Venus smack her forehead. "And there's nothing you girls can do about it." he added taunting them.

   "Oh yeah?" Mikey said elbowing Venus in the arm holding up a fighting stance "I think Pei and I could take you!"

   "I really don't want to take him anywhere." Venus said backing away.

   "Pei!" Mikey called racing up her "We have to fight!"

   "No we don't." she said smiling sheepishly at him. "We could just close our eyes and, swim around!" she added trying to get away.

   Mikey smiling slyly a her. Grabbing her arm and pulling her back, much to her discomfort he said "Come on, don't be such a gir- AAH!" he cried letting her go and grabbing his butt. "Something bit me!" he told them all looking around.

   Just then Mona popped up out of the water next to Venus and spat "Ugh! What a nasty flavor!"

   "SNAKE!!!" Mikey screamed running back to the rock with the others climbing onto it scared as well. Once that was done Mikey said smartly "Some king of the rock." Raph simply pushed him off and back into the water.

   Venus whistled calling Casey to her. The horse whinnied and raced to her shielding her from the men. She grabbed the blanket off of him wrapping it around herself saying "Boy, that was close!"

    "No that was vile!" Mona snapped pulling a toothbrush and tooth paste out of thin air. She then began to brush her teeth thoroughly. "You own me big!!" She snapped again.

   "I never want to see a naked man again." Venus told them. Just then the rest of the army raced past her as naked as he day they came out of the womb. She stared at them shocked as Casey rolled his eyes.

   Mona looked up at her still brushing her teeth and said "Hey, don't look at me, I am not biting any more butts."

                                                                         ..::-::..

   "You think you're troops are ready to fight!?" the Ancient One cried from inside his tent as Venus, Mona and Crickee walked by. Venus stopped a moment to listen. "HA! They would not last a minute against the Foot!"

   "They completed their training." Leonardo said back calmly.

   "Those boys are no more fit to be soldiers than you are to be captain!" Ancient One snapped back harshly. Leo's eyes widened a bit in an effort to stay calm. "Once the General reads my report, your troops will never see battle."

   "Oh no you don't! I worked to hard to get Venus into this war!" Mona whispered outside the tent starting to get pissed at him. "This guy's messing with my plan!" she told Crickee.

   "We're not finished!" Leo said finally snapping at him, pulling his little board down.

   "Be careful, captain." The Ancient One warned removing his hand. "The general maybe you father, but I am the emperor's council." he added with a snooty smile. Leo was still trying to maintain his composure when The Ancient One continued rudely "Oh, and I got that job on my own." Leonardo stared at him, now steaming "You're dismissed!"

   Leo stayed in the tent for a mere second before storming out. On the outside Venus was watching him approach with a sympathetic face until she said happily trying to cheer him up "Hey I'll hold him and you punch!" she added punching her hand for added effect. When Leonardo didn't slow down or smile at all, her face fell "Or not." Thinking quickly she said softly "For what it's worth, I think you're a great captain!"

   Leonardo stopped and looked back at her for a second before continuing on his way. Venus watched him leave fondly. Before Mona popped up saying "I saw that."

   "What?" Venus asked confused.

   "I don't blame you," Mona continued looking back "He is rather fine."

   "What are you talking about?" Venus asked getting more confused.

   "You like him, don't you?" she asked slyly.

   "No!" Venus said grabbing her chest "I was just trying to-"

   "Yeah alright, sure, whatever you say-Go to you tent!" she snapped at last pointing to the outside of the camp. Venus turned to leave, but not without one last smile towards Leonardo. Once she was gone Mona leaned down to Crickee rubbing her hands together evilly "I think it's time we took this war into our own hands." then begun to laugh evilly before racing off to the tent. Right before they entered The Ancient One came out in nothing but a towel and slippers on. "Aw! Dang it!" Mona said shielding her eyes "I did not need to see that!" Once he left she jumped into the tent quickly pulling Crickee in with her. On the inside Mona was now looking at a painting of the Emperor and The Ancient One shaking hands. Crickee was typing and hen he was done Mona came over and grabbed the paper saying "Alright let's see what you've got." she begun to read it as he was whipping his feet of the ink off. "'From General Splinter. Dear Son, we are waiting for the Foot as the pass. It would mean a lot if you'd come back us up.' That's great!" she told him "Except you forgot, 'Since we're out of potpourri, perhaps you wouldn't mind bringing some.'" Crickee was nodding with her. He liked that idea! "HELLO!" she yelled suddenly startling him. She then crumpled up the paper and threw it behind her "This is the army! Make it sound more urgent! Do you know what I'm talking about?"

   "Yes, ma'am!" Crickee said saluting her. He then began typing as fast as he could. Outside Casey was at the water trough drinking when he heard Mona on his back "Casey, honey! Hey we need a ride." Casey did not like her and he made that perfectly clear when he shot her with the water in his mouth.

   Mona read it smiling "That's better! Much better! Let's go!"

   He looked down at Crickee who said nervously backing away "Hay! I'm good. I'll leave, I promise!"

   Back at the spring, The Ancient One was getting out of the water fairly angry carrying with him one of his slippers, drenched and ruined. "Insubordinate ruffians!" he snapped. "You men own me a new pair of slippers!" he called to them walking more onto the bank. Adding confidently he said "And I do not scream like a girl." Just then a panda ate his slipper causing him to do just that.

   "Urgent news from the general!" Mona said in her best impression of a male voice. She was holding out the note they had written with a puppet made from straw with Crickee acting at the face. When The Ancient One looked suspiciously down at the panda she added "What's the matter? Never seen a black and white before?" she thrust the note into his face making him take it from her puppet.

   Still suspicious he asked "Who are you?"

   "Excuse me?!" Mona asked getting a little steamed "I think the question is who are you?" she pointed down on him and when he looked down she snapped the puppets fingers up making him cry out in pain. "We're in a war man! There is no time for stupid questions! I should have your hat for that!" she added trying to get but he ducked out of the way. The panda then began to move away so she quickly ripped the puppet in half and turned it around dropping the subject saying "Bu I'm felling gracious today, so carry on before I report you." The panda walked up the near tree and Mona pulled the puppet up and out of site.

   The Ancient one read the paper quickly, but spun around to ask if what he read was true. Seeing that the man was gone he raced to Leonardo's tent and burst open saying "Captain! We're needed at the front!"

   Watching the whole thing from the tree Mona smiled and high-five Crickee saying "Pack your bags, honey. We're moving out!"

   "Yahoo!" Crickee cried.
Wow this took a while to upload. ^^; those of you who who were waiting for this! I never give up on ANY of my stories so have no fear!!

Chapter 1: [link]
Chapter 2: [link]
Chapter 3: [link]
Chapter 4: [link]
Chapter 5: [link]
Chapter 7: [link]
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This is Awesome! I really like the idea of the whole Mulan TMNT style! It's so Cool!!!